the last battle(последняя битва)

*~предисловия~*

итак сперва я расскажу все попорядку . я пишу книгу,  выкладывать ее буду здесь и в английской таверне ...Это фэнтэзи рассаз, тоесть о магах и фантпстичиских криэчарс. ..Книга будет на англ. языке так как у меня англ. язык покрасивея и получше чем мой русский ...Можеть быть после того как напишу на английском переведу на русский но в оригенали будет английский и оригенал интересней ..Специально пишу английским понятным чтобы даже тот кто плохо знал английский мог пы понять его..
примечание: кстате все эти писатили англ. фантастических книг пишу на легком анг.языке дабы всем понятно было. и так поехали!
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Before the story I am gonna tell you about my project.
I am writing a book and, and the parts of it i will put in the tavern, in the english chronical table and in russsian . It's fantasy book( dragons, elfs and same stuf) the book will be in english, coz my english is better then russian and more beautiful, but thou i will translate in to russian..But like many say original is omre interesting...
ok here we go!

~Chapter1~
  ~*~That nightmares again~*~

-Come! Come! COME!-the voice hissed all over again-COME HERE!-
Godric was standing in the hill, bones was all around here covering the ground like a rug. He saw his girl...his true...true love standing in the hill on the ruins of citadel the main school academy of wizardy for wizards and witches and all other who had magical powers. Suddenly he saw her skeleton lying in the ground and the entire place was covered with fog.
"This is what's going to happened to the world, choose right or we will never see the world again as we knew it" the sentence repeated each time in Godric head harder and harder. "What to choose, and how?" Godric repeated in his head. Suddenly he saw a flash light coming from the ruins. It was the flash of death...
-AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!-cried young wizard Godric through the pain of his head. He was 18 years old, an attractive man, and many girls in the school academy were in crush on him. He was powerful wizard that succeeded in the lessons better then his friends in the class of the academy. Godric was sitting in his bed holding his head and afraid that it would crush to pieces from the pain. Suddenly he heard somebody running to his room. It was a girl, girl form the dream. They were much more then friends they were in love to each other and many of the girls in the academy were jealous.
-Godric? What happened?-she asked, her voice shacked, she was in her sleeping clothes without slippers, holding her wand in her left hand.
"She rushed out to me instantly" Godric realized.
-Is it nightmare again?-she asked
-Yes Ginny- Godric answered her.
-Well, I'm not leaving you alone with them Godric! And even don't try to argument with me!
- Ginny said softly.
She lied down to Godrics bed. Her body warming him. He didn't even mind to argument her, he didn't wanted let her go he hoped they will lie like this for ever.
She put her head on his chest and he rapped his arms around her, feeling safe and protected some how. The nightmares didn't show up again this night.
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-Sleep well?-asked Ginny when Godric opened his eyes. She was watching him sleeping for a while now.
-Yeah, I guess- Godric answered while wearing his robe and putting his basilisk amulet on the neck again.-Thanks- he said and kissed her in lips, they did it slowly but then she opened her mouth and he drank her in.
-Oh! Almost forgot-Ginny cried by braking the kiss-We are late for our spells lesson!
-What?-Godric asked- Why didn't you wake me up?-he asked wondering.
-I--I didn't want to wake you up, you had terrible dreams again:when I awoke, you was sleeping so peacefully.
-Well come on! Hurry up its dueling day today! Professor said he was opening dueling club tournaments!-Godric cried while trying to put on his pants:He pulled off his bed curtains and rose to get his pants. He caught her eye looking on him and then he realized that he was just in his boxers, Godric didn't ask her to get off the room to get dressed like he did in summer holidays. Then he realized that they were now more then just girlfriend and boyfriend like almost everybody thought.
-Go get dressed already- he said softly to Ginny
-Um...huh?...ok Godric-she whispered and ran off to girls room.
Godric put on his black pants and black shirt and his red robe. Then he took his bag with books and ran to sixth year's students common room where he waited for Ginny. They both were in their sixth year of studying, two more years and they will be full graduated wizards.

-Missed me? - Suddenly asked Ginny and gave him quick kiss on the lips.
-Come on- Godric said through the laugh, he took her hand and they both ran to the spells classroom.
-Ah at last Godric Lesanderus- Professor for spells was smiling- I think you DO know that this will affect your grades-Then he saw Ginny coming with Godric to the class, his smile became more cruel "I think he enjoys this moment" Godric thought.
-Good morning miss Wislow. It concern you too- he said looking at her
Ginny's face became redder. (Both Godric and Ginny was the perfect students of the academy)
They went to their desks sitting near their friends.
-Where have two of you been? - asked Godric's and Ginny's best friend George.
-Um:nothing...forgot about lesson- Godric answered him silently, becoming redder.
-As you all know, we were going to open the dueling tournaments and today is the first meeting! The rules are simple! The duelers are dueling each other with the spells they know, all spells are allowed except dark magic that I think you don't know-professor glanced at them strangely.
You will have to disarm your opponent, it means when he will drop his wand or couldn't duel more-he loses. Then the members of the tournaments are voting for the duelers that being dueling each other. There will be rank list after a couple of meetings and who will keep his first place in the rank, would automatically turn to captain of the dueling club. Now:LET THE TOURNAMENT BEGIN!!- Professor shouted. Then he called first duelers. Then seconds pair then third and finally he shouted.

-Godric Lesanderus!
-Sijan Melfuos!
Godric felt like his stomach jumped upside down over and over, he swallowed and went with Sijan to the dueling area. They bowed to each other and Godric let to Sijam begin.
Sijan pointed his wand to Godric and shouted -"elsme:"
But Godric realized what spell Sijan was shouting, it would dash Godric to the wall taking his wand from him, but Godric knew the defense spell.
-":..ndore" Sijan finished his spell
-"Divesta!" shouted Godric and two spells hit each other not making any harm to duelers.
-"Del cevasto passut est!" shouted Sijan pointing his wand on Godrics hand.
Godric heard around him gasps of shock because everybody knew what painful curse it was,
a pain curse, but it wasn't a physical pain it made you think and see that your arm or the part of the body that was targeted being cut off from body. It was feeling very real and could bring to disasters.
Godric felt pain all over his hand but then he thought" ITS NOT REAL! It's not real, it's not real, it's not real, it's not real, it's not real, and suddenly he felt that he was floating away from his body. He was watching from outside like at TV, Sijan pointing his wand to Godrics body. Then when Sijan moved his wand away, Godric got back to his body and put a "reverso" charm on Sijan.
Sijan froze, he dropped his wand and couldn't move. Godric heard amazed voices in the room, he looked at Ginny her eyes was red from the tears. "She was afraid that I couldn't stand the passut curse" Godric realized.
-Voting now!- said professor to spells with respect looking at Godric.
Almost everyone voted for Godric it was 18 voices for Godric and 10 for Sijan.
Godric went back to the desk while another pair went to duel each other.
He stood near Ginny, pulled his hand on her waist and hugged her, and she put her head on his chest.
-I--I thought you couldn't stand the curse and I could-I could lose you- Ginny said, her voice shacked. She put her head on his chest and started to cry. He stroke her hair and tried to calm her.
-Shhh:don't worry, don't worry, don't blame your self-he said softly but she didn't even respond. Godrics robe was wet from Ginny's tears. Then he looked at her and kissed her softly in the lips, what he never did in front of public. He felt that almost everybody was glancing at them but he didn't mind.

-Ahem! - Cleaned his voice professor Valdern-You know that its not a good time now don't you? You are still in the lesson- he said quietly smiling.
- Sorry professor- said Godric scowling.
-Now, today's meeting finished! Try to practice your spells and curses, the next tournament will be harder- professor said.
All students flood to the common hall of the citadel to eat breakfast or to rest before next lessons. The people that were in spell room gave funny looks at Godric at Ginny, and whispered to each other. Godric and Ginny were holding their hands and giggling quietly.
-Hey guys, what's up? - asked Wolf and set near.
-Oh, nothing...just eating- replied Godric through eating egg with bread.
-uf...et..strge-said Wolf champing his food and swallowing it- The master is coming here:I wonder what he wants?
Three friends looked at master, while he was coming to them.
-Godric I want to talk to you in private-commanded master of academy his robe was shining in the light.

Интересненько...

По тому, что тут попадаются некоторые моменты, напоминающие мне Г П, я могу сделать вывод, что Вам меньше 180 лет...

Пожалуйста, не обижайтесь на мое слегка язвительное замечание..
Please look in english tavern too...

Леди права. Чтобы избежать последующих сравнений рекомендую отойти от палочной теории магии. Ведь магия - это прежде всего сила духа, сила разума. Во всех продвинутых fantasy-романах эффекты от заклинаний формируются посредством силы мысли. И на мой взгляд - Дж. Р. допустила огромную ошибку, вставив палочку как необходимый атрибут мага.

Как и Dread Cat, прошу вас не обижаться, вы ведь сами хотели комментариев.

рассказ поменялся вот какие изменения очень большие...я сам подумал о том же

Prologue



"Reveal thy self sorcerer!"
The eco pounded the dark walls of the basement. Even though the room was slightly illuminated there was no torch to light them.
"You murderer! Reveal thy self"
A cold laugh was heard through the darkness and in a sudden flash of blue light
he appeared standing in the corner of the room, covered by his robe.
"Fool, they were all his"
"Traitor! You have given us your worth, your word"
"A word is a word, knight, nothing more"
"Traitor, you shall pay for what you have done!"
"Their lifes were insignificant"
"How can you, after you have told us you shall protect the town you let here be slay by the beast!?"
The beast now is mine, and tighter with the army that awaits my command all this land will be mine"
"You shall not see sun again"
And with that the knights charged with his sword prepared for a hit, he ran into the black robe, aimed and hit. A loud sound of metal meets stone was heard in the room.
The magician turned into air and appeared behind the knight, a few steps from his back.
Suddenly a sharp knife appeared in his hands- and he threw him towards the knight.
The knight hit the knife with his sword, saving him self form being hit. A high tune of the metal clash was heard and the knife flew to the wall and from there to the ground.
"No magic sorcerer! Just your blade and mine"
"Very well then, its halt beat you in your own game"
Red glow appeared in the wizards hand and a sword came out from them.
"Face to face, knight"
And they started. The knight attacked and was blocked by the wizard's sword. A cool sound of metal cut the silence of the room. Another hit and a block, and another and another...
The wizard swing his sword vertically close to the ground but the knight jumped above the sword.
The knight did the same but from above, and the wizard docked.
They both attacked at once, clashing with their swords.
"Die traitor!" the knight yelled. The wizard made a circle for a string hit wit the sword, and his robe slashed the air while he turned. The powerful strike hit the knight in his chest, slashing his thick armor like it wasn't even there.
Blood spilt through the cut. The magician kicked him in the chest and he flew all over the room. He landed on his front, his face on the floor.
Knight coughed. He lifted his head a bit and noticed the knife that was thrown on him.
He lifted the shiny knife, still lying on he ground.
Then in the reflexion of the silvered knife he saw the sorcerer running towards him.
He turned on his back and threw the knife to the wizard. Wizard screamed- as knife
stabbed in his shoulder. He pulled it off, yelling from the pain.

~~Chapter1~~
                             ~ That nightmares again~


-Come! Come! COME!-the voice hissed all over again-COME HERE!-
Godric was standing in the hill, bones was all around here covering the ground like a rug. He saw his girl...his true...true love standing in the hill on the ruins of citadel the main academy of might and magic where witches wizards and warriors were training and studying.
Suddenly he saw her skeleton lying in the ground and the entire place was covered with fog.
"This is what's going to happened to the world, choose right or we will never see the world again as we knew it" the sentence repeated each time in Godric head harder and harder. "What to choose, and how?" Godric repeated in his head. Suddenly he saw a flash light coming from the ruins. It was the flash of death...
-AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!-cried young wizard Godric through the pain of his head. He was 18 years old, an attractive man, and many girls in academy were in crush on him. He was powerful wizard that succeeded in the lessons better then his friends in the class of the academy. Godric was sitting in his bed holding his head and afraid that it would crush to pieces from the pain. Suddenly he heard somebody running to his room. It was a girl, girl form the dream. They were much more then friends they were in love to each other and many of the girls in the academy were jealous.
-Godric? What happened?-she asked, her voice shacked, she was in her sleeping clothes without slippers, holding her wand in her left hand.
"She rushed out to me instantly" Godric realized.
-Is it nightmare again?-she asked
-Yes Ginny- Godric answered her.
-Well, I'm not leaving you alone with them Godric! And even don't try to argument with me!
- Ginny said softly.
She lied down to Godrics bed. Her body warming him. He didn't even mind to argument her, he didn't wanted let her go he hoped they will lay like this for ever.
She put her head on his chest and he rapped his arms around her, feeling safe and protected some how. The nightmares didn't show up again this night.
                                                                  ***

-Sleep well?-asked Ginny when Godric opened his eyes. She was watching him sleeping for a while now.
-Yeah, I guess- Godric answered while wearing his robe and putting his basilisk amulet on the neck again.-Thanks- he said and kissed her in lips, they did it slowly but then she opened her mouth and he drank her in.
-Oh! Almost forgot-Ginny cried by braking the kiss-We are late for our spells lesson!
-What?-Godric asked- Why didn't you wake me up?-he asked wondering.
-I--I didn't want to wake you up, you had terrible dreams again:when I awoke, you was sleeping so peacefully.
-Well come on! Hurry up its dueling day today! Professor said he was opening dueling club tournaments!-Godric cried while trying to put on his pants:He pulled off his bed curtains and rose to get his pants. He caught her eye looking on him and then he realized that he was just in his boxers, Godric didn't ask her to get off the room to get dressed like he did in summer holidays. Then he realized that they were now more then just girlfriend and boyfriend like almost everybody thought.
-Go get dressed already- he said softly to Ginny
-Um...huh?...ok Godric-she whispered and ran off to girls room.
Godric put on his black pants and black shirt and his red robe. Then he took his bag with books and ran to sixth year's students common room where he waited for Ginny. They both were in their sixth year of studying, two more years and they will be full graduated wizards.
-Missed me? - Suddenly asked Ginny and gave him quick kiss on the lips.
-Come on- Godric said through the laugh, he took her hand and they both ran to the spells classroom.
-Ah at last Godric Lesanderus- Professor for spells was smiling- I think you DO know that this will affect your grades-Then he saw Ginny coming with Godric to the class, his smile became more cruel "I think he enjoys this moment" Godric thought.
-Good morning miss Wislow. It concern you too- he said looking at her
Ginny's face became redder. (Both Godric and Ginny was the perfect students of the academy)
They went to their desks sitting near their friends.
-Where have two of you been? - asked Godric's and Ginny's best friend Wolf. Wolf was at warrior section, he was going to be knight, but he got to learn some white magic.
-Um:nothing...forgot about lesson- Godric answered him silently, becoming redder.
-As you all know, we were going to open the dueling tournaments and today is the first meeting! The rules are simple! The duelers are dueling each other with the spells they know, all spells are allowed except dark magic that I think you don't know-professor glanced at them strangely.
You will have to disarm your opponent, it means when he will drop his wand or couldn't duel more-he loses. Then the members of the tournaments are voting for the duelers that being dueling each other. There will be rank list after a couple of meetings and who will keep his first place in the rank, would automatically turn to captain of the dueling club. Now:LET THE TOURNAMENT BEGIN!!- Professor shouted. Then he called first duelers. Then seconds pair then third and finally he shouted:
-Godric Lesanderus!
-Sijan Melfuos!
Godric felt like his stomach jumped upside down over and over, he swallowed and went with Sijan to the dueling area. They bowed to each other and Godric let to Sijam begin.
Sijan pointed his wand to Godric and shouted -"elsme:"
But Godric realized what spell Sijan was shouting, it would dash Godric to the wall taking his wand from him, but Godric knew the defense spell.
-":..ndore" Sijan finished his spell
-"Divesta!" shouted Godric and two spells hit each other not making any harm to duelers.
-"Del cevasto passit est!" shouted Sijan pointing his wand on Godrics hand.
Godric heard around him gasps of shock because everybody knew what painful curse it was,
a pain curse, but it wasn't a physical pain it made you think and see that your arm or the part of the body that was targeted being cut off from body

It was feeling very real and could bring to disasters.
Godric felt pain all over his hand but then he thought" ITS NOT REAL! It's not real, it's not real, it's not real, it's not real, it's not real, and suddenly he felt that he was floating away from his body. He was watching from outside like at TV, Sijan pointing his wand to Godrics body. Then when Sijan moved his wand away, Godric got back to his body and put a "reverso" charm on Sijan.
Sijan froze, he dropped his wand and couldn't move. Godric heard amazed voices in the room, he looked at Ginny her eyes was red from the tears. "She was afraid that I couldn't stand the passit curse" Godric realized.
-Voting now! - said professor to spells with respect looking at Godric.
Almost everyone voted for Godric it was 18 voices for Godric and 10 for Sijan.
Godric went back to the desk while another pair went to duel each other.
He stood near Ginny, pulled his hand on her waist and hugged her, and she put her head on his chest.
-I--I thought you couldn't stand the curse and I could-I could lose you- Ginny said, her voice shacked. She put her head on his chest and started to cry. He stroke her hair and tried to calm her.
-Shhh:don't worry, don't worry, don't blame your self-he said softly but she didn't even respond. Godrics robe was wet from Ginny's tears. Then he looked at her and kissed her softly in the lips, what he never did in front of public. He felt that almost everybody was glancing at them but he didn't mind.
-Ahem! - Cleaned his voice professor Valdern-You know that its not a good time now don't you? You are still in the lesson- he said quietly smiling.
- Sorry professor- said Godric scowling.
-Now, today's meeting finished! Try to practice your spells and curses, the next tournament will be harder- professor said.
All students flood to the common hall of the citadel to eat breakfast or to rest before next lessons. The people that were in spell room gave funny looks at Godric at Ginny, and whispered to each other. Godric and Ginny were holding their hands and giggling quietly.
-Hey guys, what's up? - asked Wolf and set near.
-Oh, nothing...just eating- replied Godric through eating egg with bread.
-uf...et..strge-said Wolf champing his food and swallowing it- The master is coming here:I wonder what he wants?
Three friends looked at master, while he was coming to them.
-Godric I want to talk to you in private-commanded master of academy his robe was shining in the light. Godirc and master teleported

кратко расскажу о следуйшем....я сам подумал о том же....и поэтому поменял...А палочка для дуэлий будет....Кстате в селдуйших сюжетах будет вот что: главный маг академии расскажет главному герою что он и сильные маги чувствуют зло в даеком севере, маг приказывает главному герою отправился и узнать что это...Герой идет в свою комнату и видет что для него уже все приготовленно...Он идет в канюшню брать лошадь...но подороге его останавливает его любовт Джинни...Она не отпускает его, ему приходится брать ее с сабой, они выезжают с академии, и вдруг к ним несется их друг...он воен не маг! они в троем идут в путешествие.....

подорге главный шлавный герой узнает...что они часть древнего предсказания что силы тьмы подет от рук 2 героев....от дракона, и от принцессы войны, любовь дракона...
Годрик-главный герой родился в год дракона.
В какой-то момент их друг предает Годрика и Джинни и переходит на сторону тьмы, происходит война меж силами тьмы и добра, добро почти проигрывает...двум героям...предстоит сражаться против того злого мага в начале...а потом против предателя друга-война. И судите сами похоже ли это будет на Гарри Потного или нет?

а и простите за кучу ошибок как вы заметили я лучше пишу на анг чем на русском.

А и кстате для каждой магии нужно свои веши..например для магии друидов нужны специальные трвы, для магии зашиты и аур нужна только сила маны и разума, для темных болевых ЗОКЛЯТИЙ не магии нужна палочка и т.д

ах да...за коменты спасибо...я бы больше обиделся если их небыло...прошу и дальше давать их...

но всю силу для крибле-крябли-бумсах маги кочают из маны, сибовых линий и т.д....нужно будет дописать в книгу....

well done!
aaargh!!

ой.., сорри..
а Гарри очень даже ничего!
подумаешь фамилия на русском смагли так звучит
И Гарри знают все! ура!
и вам того же пожелаю
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коммент к последнему посту...

дилемма -
качают ли маги силу?
иль сила качается в магах?

И если первое, то что это за Сила,
коль каждый покачаться хочет

А если второе, то с силой понятно,
но можно ли магами тех называть

Хотелось бы добавить что у нас есть раздел "Сокровищница" так вот там тже публикуются такие вещи... заметте на английском у нас лит. вещи еще не публиковались... За публикацию получите вознаграждения...

Это я собираюсь зделать но...к близжайшему времери я еше не закончю..

для сэра амуна:
маги кочаю энергетичискую  силу из энергетичиских потоков которые находятся везде....на земле в воздух под водой